I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
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Dear Rory this is an amazing blog post. This has lots of info about kids can,and why they donate. This is good exsplanation of why we sould donate to kids can. You should proberly change the color and change the text Size.
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