I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
hey Rory its Mitchell from hornby high school I like how you added who helped with the slide. Its good that you have been doing great work as I can see from your blog post. Next time can you add a bit more slides in? How long did this slide take you and your friends to make?
Hi Rory I really like the way you start your cartoon on your CIP and you remember puting on your full stop and your captial letter and remember to put on some more animtion and remember to put on some more picture.
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hey Rory its Mitchell from hornby high school I like how you added who helped with the slide.
ReplyDeleteIts good that you have been doing great work as I can see from your blog post.
Next time can you add a bit more slides in?
How long did this slide take you and your friends to make?
Hi Rory I really like the way you start your cartoon on your CIP and you remember puting on your full stop and your captial letter and remember to put on some more animtion and remember to put on some more picture.
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