I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Rory, Mum here. I have enjoyed seeing what you have been learning. Its important to show people that you care and are there. It is important to be a good friend. Well done PS - One of the pictures look like Chase Dog xx
I like how you have found many images of animals being friends with each other Rory. Next time you need to make sure the images line up with your words and that there is no space at the end.
Hey Rory. You have found some awesome pictures, you must be an animal lover!!! I am sure you are a good friend. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work on here:-)
Hello Rory it is Nana and Grandad here in Australia. We think your blog looks great. I know having friends is very important, friends can be many things, people, animals, older people who have no friends like it when other people want to be their friends. Keep up the good work at your new school. We are very happy that you think the people at this school are nice.
Hi Rory it is Jesse your dog and cat caring for others is really really cool.You have taughgt me that animal's can care for other's next time you can put a video on there
Kia ora Rory. I am glad to see the start of your blogging journey. I have seen some very good work from you so am looking forward to seeing more of it being shared here. You have some good comments here so make sure you have a read of these and take note of some of the feedback you ave been given.
You have really touched some of the people who have commented. This is one reason for sharing work. It helps others to learn something to take with them.
You have really touched some of the people who have commented. This is one reason for sharing work. It helps others to learn something to take with them.
Hey Rory Emily here. Looks like you know a lot about friendliness. I can see that you love animals. You are really friendly. It would be cool if you could make more post like this I would love that I you if you want.
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hi Rory, Mum here. I have enjoyed seeing what you have been learning. Its important to show people that you care and are there. It is important to be a good friend. Well done
ReplyDeletePS - One of the pictures look like Chase Dog xx
I like how you have found many images of animals being friends with each other Rory. Next time you need to make sure the images line up with your words and that there is no space at the end.
ReplyDeleteHey Rory. You have found some awesome pictures, you must be an animal lover!!! I am sure you are a good friend. I am looking forward to seeing more of your work on here:-)
ReplyDeleteThank you Mr Wilkinson ;-)
ReplyDeleteHello Rory it is Nana and Grandad here in Australia. We think your blog looks great. I know having friends is very important, friends can be many things, people, animals, older people who have no friends like it when other people want to be their friends. Keep up the good work at your new school. We are very happy that you think the people at this school are nice.
ReplyDeleteNext time put more words.
ReplyDeleteBy Sonny
i like your blogger about friendliness from bailey
ReplyDeleteHi Rory it is Jesse your dog and cat caring for others is really really cool.You have taughgt me that animal's can care for other's next time you can put a video on there
ReplyDeleteHi it's shikarn here. I agree with sonny put words rather then photos to tell us more.
ReplyDeletehi it's Eli From Rimu
ReplyDeletenice picture but maybe you should put more writing in or maybe you could do a slide. hope I can see more by . :)
Kia ora Rory.
ReplyDeleteI am glad to see the start of your blogging journey. I have seen some very good work from you so am looking forward to seeing more of it being shared here. You have some good comments here so make sure you have a read of these and take note of some of the feedback you ave been given.
Hi Rory it is jesse here I liked the kitten's the most.
ReplyDeleteThe 4 dog's are really cool.
hi, I like your pictures they really mean something , that what think see ya!
ReplyDeletehi it is sonny I like your pictures.
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You have really touched some of the people who have commented. This is one reason for sharing work. It helps others to learn something to take with them.
ReplyDeleteYou have really touched some of the people who have commented. This is one reason for sharing work. It helps others to learn something to take with them.
ReplyDeletehay it is me sophie aging.this awasome miss morgan will love it miss love dogs and animal's sam with me to now this me the end from me aging bye now
ReplyDeleteHey Rory Emily here.
ReplyDeleteLooks like you know a lot about friendliness. I can see that you love animals. You are really friendly. It would be cool if you could make more post like this I would love that I you if you want.