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Friday, May 24, 2019

3G4G



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On Tuesday we went to the Fo Guang Shan Buddhist Temple in Riccarton.

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Write a paragraph to recount your experience on our trip.  
Write about:
  • When we went.. Tuesday
  • Who was with you.. Year 7 and 8
  • What you did (think about the order you did things) ..We talked about budaas
  • How you felt and why you felt this way ..I felt Excited Because  I've never been there

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  • Write in full sentences (6-8 sentences is a paragraph)
  • Take care with your spelling and punctuation
  • Give your writing a title if you want to
  • Check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find

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  • Completing work within the given time frame (25 minutes)
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At 3G4G It was so cool because I have never been there I  like the Move Because it was Different and I like the Art  Because it was not like the art we see and it was cool that the man Told as about the Buddhas and I like the tattoos that was Water tattoos and we made flowers and they gave us ball’s the teachers like it LOL! And we bathed the Buddhas


Author: Buddy:
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1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Rory!

    I would really like to read your final product but your writing is running off the page! See if you can reformat it, then comment back so I can take another look!

    - Miss Birtch

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