I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi my name is Zion and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your video, it is so cool. I like how your person kicked the bear. Maybe next time you could make it longer.
Hi my name is Maddie from Blaketown School, I liked how you made it step by step but ya missed out some stuff that could have been in there, its nice that you used more than 200 pages, that would have taken ages, how long did it take? See ya
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Hi my name is Zion and I am from Waikowhai Primary School. I like your video, it is so cool. I like how your person kicked the bear. Maybe next time you could make it longer.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Maddie from Blaketown School, I liked how you made it step by step but ya missed out some stuff that could have been in there, its nice that you used more than 200 pages, that would have taken ages, how long did it take?
ReplyDeleteSee ya
Hi Rory I love this animation those are good pics
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