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Tuesday, November 8, 2016

the Monster and the Boy

Once upon  a time   there was   a  8 year old  boy and he was in the forest by  a lake. He was Cooking same marshmallows. His  name is Jake. The Monsters name is  Bob.   The monster came out of the water and   through the  woods.  Bob went  Grrrrrrrrrarrrr!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!   And  Jake went ahhhhh!!!! Jake was  scared  of the monster he had to use his Stick  as a sword.  Then he found out  that  the monster  was a bit friendly. Bob he  got grumpy because there was no more marshmallows left.  So  the boy gave the monster his pillow that looked like a marshmallow. The fire was booming. The monster thort that hi cood  roast the pillow The boy ran away the boy ran to his tent. Got his pillow that looked like a marshmallow so the boy chucked the pillow  the monster grabbed  the pillow  so the boy ran.The boy ran through the woods where did he go?  The  monster went to the fire the pillow disappeared.

By Camryn and Rory


2 comments:

  1. Rory's favorite marshmallows!
    Great story boys.

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  2. What a good story using the photos as a brain storm and to have a beginning ,a middle and an end to a story. If you ever get stuck for an idea of a story you should try this method again to help you.

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