I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hey Rory I like how much information you had about pink shirt day. I like how you have lots of pink in this post. Next time can you add how much you need to donate?
I like the DLO that you created today during CIP. I am also really pleased to see that you were able to post it to your blog within the given time frame. It's wonderful to see such hard work :)
Next time try adding an introduction and conclusion to your blog post to explain what DLO you are sharing with us. - Miss Birtch
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or Ask a question you want to know more about
Hey Rory I like how much information you had about pink shirt day.
ReplyDeleteI like how you have lots of pink in this post.
Next time can you add how much you need to donate?
What does pink shirt day mean to you?
Kia ora Rory!
ReplyDeleteI like the DLO that you created today during CIP. I am also really pleased to see that you were able to post it to your blog within the given time frame. It's wonderful to see such hard work :)
Next time try adding an introduction and conclusion to your blog post to explain what DLO you are sharing with us.
- Miss Birtch