Learn On Tuesday we went to the Fo Guang Shan Buddhist Temple in Riccarton.
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Write a paragraph to recount your experience on our trip.
Write about:
When we went.. Tuesday
Who was with you.. Year 7 and 8
What you did (think about the order you did things) ..We talked about budaas
How you felt and why you felt this way ..I felt Excited Because I've never been there
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Choose your words carefully
Write in full sentences (6-8 sentences is a paragraph)
Take care with your spelling and punctuation
Give your writing a title if you want to
Check your work: read it through and fix any mistakes you find
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Completing work within the given time frame (25 minutes)
Using full stops and capital letters in ALL the right places
Self-editing your work to improve and fix up simple mistakes
Peer-editing with a buddy; your buddy must write you a comment
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At 3G4G It was so cool because I have never been there I like the Move Because it was Different and I like the Art Because it was not like the art we see and it was cool that the man Told as about the Buddhas and I like the tattoos that was Water tattoos and we made flowers and they gave us ball’s the teachers like it LOL! And we bathed the Buddhas
Author: Buddy:
Buddy Comment:
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Kia ora Rory!
ReplyDeleteI would really like to read your final product but your writing is running off the page! See if you can reformat it, then comment back so I can take another look!
- Miss Birtch