I am a student at in Uru MÄnuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Rory, I really like you blog post and I think that it is awesome. I like how you told us about the needs and wants. Maybe next time you could tell us what the pictures are. You could also write about what you were told in class and what you had to do. Keep up the amazing work Rory.
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Hi Rory, I really like you blog post and I think that it is awesome. I like how you told us about the needs and wants. Maybe next time you could tell us what the pictures are. You could also write about what you were told in class and what you had to do. Keep up the amazing work Rory.
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