I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Your car isnt even painted in that picture mate. Not long till the season starts now. I like how you have done the border & made the writing stand out.
Hi my name is Morgan I like that you have a mini dragster I like it because I like things that go fast it looks really cool do you race it? Bye Please answer
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Your car isnt even painted in that picture mate.
ReplyDeleteNot long till the season starts now.
I like how you have done the border & made the writing stand out.
Hi my name is Morgan I like that you have a mini dragster I like it because I like things that go fast it looks really cool do you race it? Bye Please answer
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