I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Rory, Mum & Dad are so proud of how you race your car & listen to what is said. As motor sport can be dangerous. Cant wait till our next race meeting. We hope to have "Toybox" painted & with all the stickers on.
Hello Rory its Jorja here to say that this is amazing fantastic awesome I've been go carting but that the closest to this tha t look like soooooo much fun . What was the best bit?
Sup Rory it's Jake here. That's cool did you make that because if you did that's just amazing But maybe next time put a bit of writing in. Bye Bye Bye.
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Rory, Mum & Dad are so proud of how you race your car & listen to what is said. As motor sport can be dangerous.
ReplyDeleteCant wait till our next race meeting.
We hope to have "Toybox" painted & with all the stickers on.
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ReplyDeleterory i love how cool your race car is i want that dragster
ReplyDeleteHello Rory its Jorja here to say
ReplyDeletethat this is amazing fantastic awesome I've been go carting but that the closest to this tha t look like soooooo much fun .
What was the best bit?
Sup Rory it's Jake here. That's cool did you make that because if you did that's just amazing But maybe next time put a bit of writing in.
ReplyDeleteBye Bye Bye.
Bonjour Rory it's Chelsea.
ReplyDeleteThis is really cool to see you are racing other people. Next time can you say how long you have had it for? Keep it up.